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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by DoughGuy on Thu May 24, 2012 7:24 am

    They do slaughter around 50 angels guarding them. Thats 50 swords. Of course most of them will use hammers and pick axes but a few use swords. But thanks for the realism check, i completely forgot they wouldnt be that common.


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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by ViralEnsign_ on Thu May 24, 2012 7:32 am

    Lol I actually thought I was sounding like a total **** in making that criticism but i reality realise that I wish people would critique my stuff more so I thought you might appreciate a little suggestion.

    God the section I was going to post for Letos tonight is too big to finish. Will have to do it tomorow....


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    [11:10:04 p.m.] Kwith: Woah.
    [11:10:08 p.m.] Kwith: ..Woah.
    [11:10:14 p.m.] Robb "the Ensign_": FATALITY!
    [11:10:16 p.m.] ◥▶️_◀️◤ TehInfamousAmos: AHAHAHAHAHAHA
    [11:10:19 p.m.] Tolvo: You want to see sexual tension.
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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by DoughGuy on Thu May 24, 2012 7:36 am

    Damn. Well I'll have more time to critique it tomorrow so might be a good thing. Although I will get to play Dragons Dogma tomorrow so I might not be online lol. C is such a crap language to program in.


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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by ViralEnsign_ on Thu May 24, 2012 7:41 am

    Tell me how it is. Im not quite sold on it yet. Seem kind of like a try hard monster hunter....


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    [11:10:04 p.m.] Kwith: Woah.
    [11:10:08 p.m.] Kwith: ..Woah.
    [11:10:14 p.m.] Robb "the Ensign_": FATALITY!
    [11:10:16 p.m.] ◥▶️_◀️◤ TehInfamousAmos: AHAHAHAHAHAHA
    [11:10:19 p.m.] Tolvo: You want to see sexual tension.
    [11:10:20 p.m.] ◥▶️_◀️◤ TehInfamousAmos: BEASTIALITY
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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by DoughGuy on Thu May 24, 2012 7:45 am

    Sure will.


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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by ViralEnsign_ on Thu May 24, 2012 8:06 am

    I challenge the Writers Block to imagine themselves in the middle of a natural distaster and to write a short section about themselves told from a third person perspective. I choose Easrthquake.... probably because I've lived through enough to one hundred percent be able to re tell the whole scenario and what its like.


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    [[11:09:53 p.m.] Robb "the Ensign_": The sexual tension is enough to blow wyrms head off
    [11:10:04 p.m.] Kwith: Woah.
    [11:10:08 p.m.] Kwith: ..Woah.
    [11:10:14 p.m.] Robb "the Ensign_": FATALITY!
    [11:10:16 p.m.] ◥▶️_◀️◤ TehInfamousAmos: AHAHAHAHAHAHA
    [11:10:19 p.m.] Tolvo: You want to see sexual tension.
    [11:10:20 p.m.] ◥▶️_◀️◤ TehInfamousAmos: BEASTIALITY
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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by DoughGuy on Thu May 24, 2012 8:09 am

    ^Cheater. I'll post mine tomorrow. I really have to do my assignment. Probably do bushfire since thats close to heart. or maybe hurricane.


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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by Tolvo on Thu May 24, 2012 10:53 am

    Actually Viral that reminds me of a little game I play with some friends. Every now and then when we are together we tell "Ghost Stories." We have to come up with a horror story based off of a theme for the night, and see who can come up with the scariest one on the spot. Maybe we should do that one next time, though I'll have a home field advantage. Do you want me to do a critique of one of your pieces?

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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by ViralEnsign_ on Thu May 24, 2012 4:41 pm

    Sure let me post one. Ill be back on later this avo


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    [[11:09:53 p.m.] Robb "the Ensign_": The sexual tension is enough to blow wyrms head off
    [11:10:04 p.m.] Kwith: Woah.
    [11:10:08 p.m.] Kwith: ..Woah.
    [11:10:14 p.m.] Robb "the Ensign_": FATALITY!
    [11:10:16 p.m.] ◥▶️_◀️◤ TehInfamousAmos: AHAHAHAHAHAHA
    [11:10:19 p.m.] Tolvo: You want to see sexual tension.
    [11:10:20 p.m.] ◥▶️_◀️◤ TehInfamousAmos: BEASTIALITY
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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by Digitalyzed on Thu May 24, 2012 4:49 pm

    I haven't read every post in this thread, but what kind of creative writing do you guys do? I aspire to create another proper novel someday, but for now I stick to short (Under 5000 words) stories.


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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by DoughGuy on Thu May 24, 2012 7:00 pm

    Atm I'm doing a fantasy fiction, not sure how long. Viral's doing a unch of different stories and Tolvo is doing a small book I think.

    Tonight I have to write a short story for you guys, write a bunch of lore for the upcoming war and play dragons dogma. Gonna be a good night.


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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by Tolvo on Thu May 24, 2012 7:49 pm

    I mostly do prose and some poetry, though only by request as I detest writing poetry. Like Dough, I'm writing a book as well though I can't really explain to you a genre.
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    Post by DoughGuy on Thu May 24, 2012 8:08 pm

    I like writing small poems like the ones I posted in the museum. I hate writing/reading anything larger though.


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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by DoughGuy on Thu May 31, 2012 6:05 am

    So since this needs a bump hopefully I'll get a character profile done tonight.


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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by DoughGuy on Thu May 31, 2012 7:46 am

    Joel


    Age: ~600


    Height: 6’ 6”


    Weight: 250lbs


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    Weapons: Large Greatsword and small katana, chain.


    Armour: Jeans are reinforced with steel bars. Subdermal armour implants.


    Affiliation: Angels, iconoclude


    The best Iconoclude ever produced by the angels Joel played
    an integral part in the worlds history 500 years ago (don’t want to spoil too
    much). However his advanced age means he
    needs greater downtime between missions to allow his body to recover from the
    drugs and stimulants pumped into his system.
    He remains an effective agent especially for critical missions.


    His kill count is in the hundreds, possibly thousands. When unleashed he acts on instinct rather
    than logic, pursuing his prey like a wolf or dog before unleashing upon them in
    frenzy. His armour implants allow him to
    shrug off smaller weapon hits with ease and his speed prevents most from
    landing. He uses his GS to take on large
    groups of foes or take on a single more powerful foe while using the katana to
    block other blows and hit targets of opportunity. Occasionally he will replace one of his
    swords with the chain, using it to take out foes non lethally so they can be
    questioned.


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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by Tolvo on Thu May 31, 2012 3:02 pm

    Why would he want such inefficient weapons? As well why would he want to keep his chest bare but feel the need to protect his legs?
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    Post by DoughGuy on Thu May 31, 2012 7:21 pm

    Subdermal armour implants, he does have an armoured chest. He fights with inefficient weapons cause the pic has him holding such weapons and its my inspiration for him.


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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by Tolvo on Thu May 31, 2012 7:28 pm

    Inspiration is one thing, but you shouldn't restrict your own work because of someone else's.
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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by DoughGuy on Thu May 31, 2012 7:48 pm

    Thing is that pic has always been Joel, I havent ever though of him differrently. I think if I change dhim in any way it wouldnt feel like the same character.


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    Post by ViralEnsign_ on Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:38 am

    Lol I have a few pic of characters that I created then needed inspiration for them and boom there they were. I post

    Adys the Elf-[img]http://soulswiki.forumsrpg.com/[/img]

    She actually has longer hair for most of the first book but cuts it off when the war begin and Thane comes back from the Emmeralis with his Wyrm Arrodach'de'nurn. She is also the Wyrm Tongue one of the few who can speak the Wyrm language but the only one who can speak it fluently and in thier accent. She has a forked tongue just like them, and is the same as Thane, who has his left arm grow in to Arrodach's missing claw earning him Thane Talonhand as his moniker, and earning her the moniker .... something.

    Thane-


    Letos (just my Dragons Dogma character i made)-

    but thats about all i havepics for.

    oh and Kries Chernzy just look kind of like a real life Mullen from the Last Exile.


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    [11:10:04 p.m.] Kwith: Woah.
    [11:10:08 p.m.] Kwith: ..Woah.
    [11:10:14 p.m.] Robb "the Ensign_": FATALITY!
    [11:10:16 p.m.] ◥▶️_◀️◤ TehInfamousAmos: AHAHAHAHAHAHA
    [11:10:19 p.m.] Tolvo: You want to see sexual tension.
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    Post by DoughGuy on Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:40 am

    Are there meant to be images cause nothing is howing up for me.


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    Post by ViralEnsign_ on Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:45 am

    No I just have to serve the drinks at a party so I wont be posting them untill I find them later .


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    [[11:09:53 p.m.] Robb "the Ensign_": The sexual tension is enough to blow wyrms head off
    [11:10:04 p.m.] Kwith: Woah.
    [11:10:08 p.m.] Kwith: ..Woah.
    [11:10:14 p.m.] Robb "the Ensign_": FATALITY!
    [11:10:16 p.m.] ◥▶️_◀️◤ TehInfamousAmos: AHAHAHAHAHAHA
    [11:10:19 p.m.] Tolvo: You want to see sexual tension.
    [11:10:20 p.m.] ◥▶️_◀️◤ TehInfamousAmos: BEASTIALITY
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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by DoughGuy on Fri Jun 01, 2012 2:49 am

    ok


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    Re: Creative Writers Sanctum

    Post by DoughGuy on Mon Jun 04, 2012 1:45 am

    You should post when you edit in photoes.


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    Post by ViralEnsign_ on Mon Jun 04, 2012 2:43 am

    Quoi? Or what does this mean?


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    [[11:09:53 p.m.] Robb "the Ensign_": The sexual tension is enough to blow wyrms head off
    [11:10:04 p.m.] Kwith: Woah.
    [11:10:08 p.m.] Kwith: ..Woah.
    [11:10:14 p.m.] Robb "the Ensign_": FATALITY!
    [11:10:16 p.m.] ◥▶️_◀️◤ TehInfamousAmos: AHAHAHAHAHAHA
    [11:10:19 p.m.] Tolvo: You want to see sexual tension.
    [11:10:20 p.m.] ◥▶️_◀️◤ TehInfamousAmos: BEASTIALITY

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