Opinions on my Str/Faith Build

http://mugenmonkey.com/darksouls/?c=132669073158670359

Sorry for the constant posts of my builds but the itch to make different builds has been unbearable lately. This build started out as a typical Str build but i added in faith for more versatility.

TWoP isn't going to be something many will like but if it is in the game, then it's fine to use. All in all, TWoP is what will help me even the odds against fast flippers. Overall, it looks like any normal Str/Faith Build but i feel like something's wrong with the build. Suggestions?

Without changing your spells/weapons/gear setup (much), this one has better hp/poise. No you dont have the RTSR on but its easy to switch to when your health gets low.

http://mmdks.com/8oc

Heres another, same gear/weapons (almost)

http://mmdks.com/8od

I'm liking the builds you made although i'll be keeping the Guardian Gauntlets. Why would you recommend the Crossbow to the Composite Bow?