by WhatDoesThePendantDo? Fri Jun 29, 2012 12:27 pmEpona would be awesome in MLP.
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WhatDoesThePendantDo? wrote:Rarity wrote:I have accutly stop watching the show and stared making fan fics
Post some on here when you can, I'm sure some folks will get a kick out of it.
Here is my fan fic! Rainbow factory 2 (A Unoffical Rip squal) WARNING! Spelling erros exist
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- It was going to be a normal day... Nothing out of the ordinary...
Well at lest that's what Fluttershy was thinking 6 clock in the morning in her bed wen she woke up to feed her early risers. She got up and face greeted by the sun light shining down between the drapes of her window. Even for Equestria it was a supremely lovely day. The weather manes had really outdone them self this time Fluttershy thought for her self vile she busily worked to make angel's breakfast meet the high standards required to please the bunny. Even wen she was stacking the salad leaves she could not take her eyes from the lovely weather out side. Even a rainbow was shining....... A rainbow.... The memory’s over flooded her. The screaming of countless pegasi vile they where forced through the clogs and the pressers of that horrible place. All in the name of making the colors of the rainbow. Fluttershy dropped her glass salad bowl making it shatter in to many tiny pieces on her wooden floor.
-No she said told her self That place doesn’t exist anymore...they probably got some unicorns to do the grunt work. She started cleaning up the bowls shattered pieces from the floor when she herd a knock on her door.
-Fluttershy? Have gotten up out of bed yet? The voice was undauntedly Twilight so Fluttershy quietly went to the door. With a light push the door oped and Fluttershy was greeted by a face she wood never forget. The tears running down and the empty and hopeless expression on her face
-What is the matter Twilight? Fluttershy said with a worrying voice
-Its Scootaloo! I haven’t seen her for day's!! Twilight responded Have you seen her?
-No..Cant say I have...
-Any ides???
-Have you looked with Zecora?
-Well...that was my next stop...If you see..
-I tell you as soon as I know anything
-Thank you Fluttershy! Twilight said vile running of to the Everfree forest. Fluttershy hated to lie to her best friend...But it was for the best. Scootaloo have visited her only a couple days ago telling her what she had been through at the Rainbow factory and how she had escaped vile Rainbow dash died in the chase.
Fluttershy knew den and there that she had been retaken and was going to be ''Used'' by that horrible place. With a resolve that wood shock even Rarity Fluttershy said good bye to her animals...It was time to go back to the place of her nightmares
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It was still there...Hiding in the clouds away from Cloudsdale. Some wood say ironic but it was there for a reason. Fluttershy saw that the place wasn’t guarded from the outside. So sneaking in the way she ran last time was a piece of cake. The garbage disposal was still in the same place.
-Lets hope I fit... she said with the same resolve she have had this in entire trip . Squeezing in was painful yet she fit still even wen she was no longer the filly. With a bit of effort she started crawling up the garbage disposal hopping that nobody was trowing anything away today. The bones of a pegasi couldn’t be used for anything so they where cremated in a oven and den trow in to the garbage disposal. Sadly most of the workers where to lazy for the fist part as Fluttershy soon realized when she was greeted half way up by the skull of a filly pegasi. Fluttershy body stiffen now understanding the magnitude of her task. The eye-holes of the filly was still staid with blood and colors of the accursed rainbow. Fluttershy however pushed the skull aside
-I get you before this happens Scootaloo... I promise you Fluttershy told her self to hid the fear and the despair she felt. This was her hell and no friends could save her. Soon the exit to her short tunnel appeared. Squeezing as the tunnel she was in got tighter she saw the light...or rather the dark unwelcoming factory lights of the Rainbow factory. When she squeezed her self out of her tunnel she saw her next horror. The still rotting corpse of her late friend Rainbow dash hung up like a puppet on strikes made from her own interstice. The color of her mane glowing as brightly as ever. Over her stood a message in the colors of the rainbow with a dark tone.
''You betrayed me! You *** traitor''
''Yes rainbow dash...I shall never forgive your sacrifice'' Small candles and pitchers of rainbow dash was scattered all across the room. The supposed garbage room was now something different.
''I been dreaming I been waiting to fly with does great pony's! The Wonderbolts there daring tricks! Spinning around having hicks!'' was on another wall.
''Pinky your so random'' Fluttershy started to feel sick
''Forever yours rainbow....Forever...'' Fluttershy started looking for a door
''I be the pony you always wanted! MARK MY WORDS'' Fluttershy saw it...the escape from this room of horror. She rushed ageist the door hitting it with all her strength. But the door dinit not lead to a room with a incinerator. It lead to narrow cat walk. Fluttershy felled down in the gap between the wall and the catwalk unable to control her self plunged in to the incoming darkness....Until she used her wings and regain control and flew back on to the catwalk. That terror moment out of the way she took a good look around the new room. Quite empty and cold even for the rainbow factory...Or what she could remember from it. Walking lightly over the cat walk to the outer side she saw a open door.
The outer side was what she had been excepting from the beginning of the trip. A huge hall with many clogs and pressers and outer nefarious devices. Even the screams of the dieing pegasi echo through the hollow walls of the factory. Fluttershy remembered it all now crystal clear. Her old friends... all cursed under the same clogs. Taking a moment to rest in order to cam her self down she spotted 3 outer pony’s coming in from a small door on the left side of the hall. On closer examination one dress in medical glam and had a mask on its face. The second one had green mane and its lips where moving however the clogs and pressers was louder. The third one was dressed in doctor uniform and had all his legs chained together in a fashion that wood make him walk very slowly. They all slowly wander across the hall in question Fluttershy doing her best to hide. They all stop shortly in front of a massive iron gate. The pony with the medical glam made a head gesture to a green haired one who den pulled a leaver witch opened the gate in question letting them all in. Fluttershy saw that a small door at the end of her catwalk was in the same wall as the iron gate. She started to move very slowly to the door being careful not to make a sound. The door was fortunately unguarded and unlock so sneaking in to the room on the outer side was a peace of cake.
The outer side was a massive chamber with nothing expect a massive centerpiece. Seeing how the green haired pony started to strap the one with a mask in to the machine vile the doctor started to argue. Moust of the sound from the hall was now gone so the words ecod in the emity room.
This operation is idiotic! The one with the doctor uniform angrily stated
-How so doctor? responded the green haired one vile finishing the straps. Now with a push of a bottom 2 half’s of a giant metal wings came down from the sealing.
This is her own chose. She is the one who could not get over last dictators death The green one continued in a cam tone
She is only... The doctor responded sounding more desperate
This is what she wood have wanted! The pony in the mask responded
Now you do what you have been told and your doter wont becoming next session color of red! Fluttershy recognize the voice...But she told her self she was hearing wrong... it was no way that could be..
The second part of the massive metal half’s came down forming around where the wings wood sit on a real pony.
The doctor took forth a scalpel and with hard looks from his ''Employers'' he started cutting up the sides. Only now did Fluttershy see that this pony lacked wings of any kind.
-Okay... the doctor started to sweat. You sure you don’t wanna be sedated?
-Rainbow dash wood have taking this as any challenge head on! I shall do the same!
-Fine den...The doctor waved to the green-haired. He push another bottom who reviled 6 metal rods 3 on each side from the nearby walls. Fluttershy saw in horror how these now where pushed in to the pony slowly. The bone that was there was slowly crushed wen the 3 metal rods glowing white hot fused with each outer to from a basic skeleton for pegasi wings. The pony who was in the center of this act never closed its eyes. Allays looking straight up. The doctor started working on the second part of the operation. Now now the metal wings closed around the ''bones''. This part was very painful indeed for the rods that where already white hot got even warmer wen the metal flowed down to make new wings. The doctor Fluttershy and the green-haired one all watch in horror and awe as the wing half’s well down. 2 new giant wings double the size of the pony with cold metal colors had formed.
-Its...done... The pony with the mask said vile gasping for air. Take..this mask..off...i want to see my self now.. The doctor obeyed taking off the mask revealing that Fluttershy's fear was correct. The face that was shown was a orange pony that wasn’t very old. The old look of happiness was gone now only a cold aura of depraved joy was in her eyes. It was Scootaloo...
-You have made your wings to big...you wont be able to use them...not with out a lot of pain The doctor said with a tone of fear
-Your wrong! These wings will do! These is what rainbow dash wanted... Scootaloo said.... Isn’t that right Fluttershy!!?? Fluttershy was throne back wen all heads turned to overseeing catwalk.
-What...happened...to you? Fluttershy said
-This is what she always wanted! Scootaloo responded. This wings will make me the fastest flier in Equestira! I will be the new leader of the Wonderbolts! I fulfill her dreams!
-...Rainbow dash...that room.. Scootaloo eyes widen
-You..been in my...HOW?! Scootaloo voice echo with rag
-Doesn’t matter! You cant live her life! SHE IS DEAD!
-Your wrong! I WILL BE THE PONY SHE ALLWAYS WANTED! AND I PORVE IT TO YOU! Scootaloo started to move her new wings slowly. The rest of the pony stood silent in awe as Scootaloo massive wings took there first wing beat. Yet She couldn’t get of the ground
-WHY? Scootaloo shouted agents the doctor
-They are to big and heavy...I told you this wood happened responded the doctor
-NO! YOUR WRONG YOUR ALL WORNG! Scootaloo yelled out angrily as she started to move the wings faster
-You will break your bones doing that! Shouted the doctor again
-SHUT UP! Scootaloo swung around hitting the doctor on the head with her giant metal wings. Her face was filled with pain and satisfaction as she continued to beating up on the doctor. Her hoofs stomping and smashing in his face vile the 2 remaining pony’s was onlookers. Finally when her hoofs lifted from his face she turned on Fluttershy. She smiled a bloody grin
-You see? No problem!
-Scootaloo... Fluttershy said quietly
-Shut up! You going back where you worthless fliers belong! YOU NEVER ECSAPE MY RAINBOW FACTORY!
Scootaloo used her wings to dash over the room ageist Fluttershy at a alarming speed smashing in to Fluttershy body. Smiling even more she started beating Fluttershy.
You...Poor..Little thing... was the only thing Fluttershy cloud think...
It was going to be a normal day... Nothing out of the ordinary...
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That's pretty good and extremely scary 
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Hello everyone! This is NPC White Mage reporting in from Bronycon NJ! It's hot as hell in this maze like city, and opening ceremonies are just hours away! For those of you interested, I will be bringing you updates and pics from the con.
Bronycon.com has more information and EQD is at the event too!
It is going to be a fantastic weekend!
Bronycon.com has more information and EQD is at the event too!
It is going to be a fantastic weekend!
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NPCWhiteMage wrote:Hello everyone! This is NPC White Mage reporting in from Bronycon NJ! It's hot as hell in this maze like city, and opening ceremonies are just hours away! For those of you interested, I will be bringing you updates and pics from the con.
Bronycon.com has more information and EQD is at the event too!
It is going to be a fantastic weekend!
I am so jelly right now, wibble wobble.
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Wade_Wilson wrote:NPCWhiteMage wrote:Hello everyone! This is NPC White Mage reporting in from Bronycon NJ! It's hot as hell in this maze like city, and opening ceremonies are just hours away! For those of you interested, I will be bringing you updates and pics from the con.
Bronycon.com has more information and EQD is at the event too!
It is going to be a fantastic weekend!
I am so jelly right now, wibble wobble.
I tried to come up with a clever way to say "same here," but couldn't. So...same here
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Servant of Priscilla wrote:That's pretty good and extremely scary
REALLY? -HUGE BIG EYES-
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Interesting story rarity. I would not have thought that MLP would have such brutality.
Of course I have seen worse, but not expected for ponies in general.
Of course I have seen worse, but not expected for ponies in general.
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What have I missed so far in this thread?
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Digitalyzed wrote:What have I missed so far in this thread?
Me and Rarity descending into the realm of despair and madness that is fanfiction.
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It's only natural that someone(s) would fall to itWade_Wilson wrote:Digitalyzed wrote:What have I missed so far in this thread?
Me and Rarity descending into the realm of despair and madness that is fanfiction.
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Acidic_Cook wrote:Interesting story rarity. I would not have thought that MLP would have such brutality.
Of course I have seen worse, but not expected for ponies in general.
Well its a rip off of rainbow factory...Wtich...well is about Rainbow dash being burtal to a centrant filly...And said filly's fate is uncertent at the end....
Well i am happy you like it! Really gives my self-cofidence a much needed boost (I am about to fight the 4 kings....aint looking to hotly)
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Wade_Wilson wrote:Digitalyzed wrote:What have I missed so far in this thread?
Me and Rarity descending into the realm of despair and madness that is fanfiction.
Dubble POSTING POWWAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now that i have posted my Sorta magnum opus you must post some fun fan fic your have wirten
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Rarity wrote:Wade_Wilson wrote:Digitalyzed wrote:What have I missed so far in this thread?
Me and Rarity descending into the realm of despair and madness that is fanfiction.
Dubble POSTING POWWAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Now that i have posted my Sorta magnum opus you must post some fun fan fic your have wirten
I'm starting a particular story tomorrow which will run on pretty long. I can link it to you if and when I write parts of it. It'll involve the mane six in a hellish-post apocalyptic world where they meet Anonymous.
By the way, you should check out the Anon in Equestria threads on /mlp/ - it's a general discussion of fanfiction and people also post stories there.
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Curse these ponies, they drive me to insomnia!
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Spurgun wrote:
DAIM U INTERWEBS ARE THERE ALLWAYS PIC'S OF PONYS DOING ''FUNNY'' THINGS?
DAIM UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
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Jag förstår inte vad du säger
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Ponies are horses that forgot the growth spurt. IMO, I think black stallion is WAY cooler.
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Rarity wrote:DAIM U INTERWEBS ARE THERE ALLWAYS PIC'S OF PONYS DOING ''FUNNY'' THINGS?
DAIM UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Feels refreshing to go back to good ol' Kyrospawn
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Reaperfan wrote:Rarity wrote:DAIM U INTERWEBS ARE THERE ALLWAYS PIC'S OF PONYS DOING ''FUNNY'' THINGS?
DAIM UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Feels refreshing to go back to good ol' Kyrospawn
Agread! Maby sombody shoude open a therd with the ide of posting Youtubid clips that they find funny
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Did any body see Mic the Microphone stage dive at Brony-Con NJ?? If not here is the link 
http://www.frequency.com/video/mic-microphone-stage-dive-bcny-2012/52675891 it says ny in the link but that was a faulty label by the Poster
http://www.frequency.com/video/mic-microphone-stage-dive-bcny-2012/52675891 it says ny in the link but that was a faulty label by the Poster
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https://soulswiki.forumotion.com/t7646-brony-video-picture-dump#159171 Well here you go all of you wanted a picture/video topic well here you go. enjoy
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Servant of Priscilla wrote:Did any body see Mic the Microphone stage dive at Brony-Con NJ?? If not here is the link
Not so much a stage dive, as it was a stage-daintily-fall-off-butt-first-into-the-crowd dive.
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