New pvp build, comments and stuff appreciated.

First one of these I've done in a long time. Just kinda out for fun.

My goal was to combine strength and dex weapons, in order to achieve this I decided to use both velka's rapier and the moonlight greatsword. This allows me to use intelligence as my main damage modifier. The build skimps on vitality a bit, and there is an excessive amount of endurance to keep the fast rolling speed while still having enough poise to use the larger weapons. The notched whip is offhanded for funsies.

The overall theme is a vampire knight. Watched a friend play castlevania all weekend. The spells are meant to reflect that.

http://tinyurl.com/9j87vzt

Let me know what you guys think.

Hey long time no see dude. I did a few tweaks to the build. The problems I see is that you're increasing 1 AR per Dex for the Velka's Rapier, it's like increasing it past 40, it has very low HP and useless poise. You'll be mostly menu swapping, so feel free to add an enchanted Composite Bow. Let me know what do you think.

http://mugenmonkey.com/darksouls/?c=2054208316771744

Sadly the builds at sl 30 and the dex being lowered by much isn't an option hahahaha. I did go back and check out some of the research done on poise and the build was just under one of the poise caps (76?)

Lowering it by 10 and splitting that between vit and end makes the build a bit more solid while still sticking to the two weapons. I likely won't add a bow and may swap out chameleon with soul spear. http://tinyurl.com/9xoec3r

Thanks for the help though, I completely forgot how poise works apparently.