My Dark Souls Song.

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    My Dark Souls Song.

    Post by Judgedeath on Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:37 pm

    Hey all, Ive written a song called Dark Souls. If enough ppl like the words I will try and get a recording done, if not maybe you can just have fun with it by adding your own words.

    There are things I should have done that I did not do,
    Things I should not have done that I did do,
    A promise I should have kept to the voice of reason,
    A life time of regret for a life of freedom.

    Now every where I look I see demons,
    every one I know says they've seen them,
    I can taste them in the air that I breath,
    I can feel them in the words that I speak.
    Chorus
    When I look into the sky I see Dark clouds,
    when I close my eyes I hear dark sounds,
    when i reach inside my mind I think dark thoughts,
    When I look inside my heart I see a dark soul.

    Everything I know has lost its meaning,
    everything I felt has lost its feeling,
    Its like i'm being controlled by a dark force,
    turning my once pure heart into a dark soul.

    When you look into the sky do you see dark clouds,
    when you close your eyes do you hear dark sounds,
    when you reach inside your minds do you think dark thoughts,
    when you look inside your hearts do you see dark souls.

    Thank's for looking hope you enjoy happy






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    Re: My Dark Souls Song.

    Post by RandelOolacile on Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:50 pm

    I like it! I'd like to hear the musical version! =D


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    Re: My Dark Souls Song.

    Post by skarekrow13 on Sun Jul 15, 2012 5:03 pm

    That's pretty cool. Would like to hear out with music also. Can add that or anything you guy art wise to the museum. Link in my signature

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    Re: My Dark Souls Song.

    Post by ZikoLogiKa NL on Sun Jul 15, 2012 9:37 pm

    Good stuff Judge & Thanks for sharing !

    I always welcome inspirational-creativity cheers


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    Re: My Dark Souls Song.

    Post by billy_bayonet on Sun Jul 15, 2012 10:46 pm

    from a muso's point of view its very basic, but sometiems basic is what you want from lyrics how powerful do you intend the chorus to be?


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    Re: My Dark Souls Song.

    Post by ZikoLogiKa NL on Sun Jul 15, 2012 11:13 pm

    Well it's very hard to critisize a lyric if the recipient doesn't know what type of music it will become when recorded.

    Personally I prefer deep meaningfull or thought provocing lyrics to set the tone and mood for a song / track.

    I also prefer the vocals to be louder then the background beat , and I like instrumentals which only consist of a few instruments the most.

    Some people rate a song by ''flow'' , Im more of a lyrics kind of musical-enthusiast big grin


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    Re: My Dark Souls Song.

    Post by Judgedeath on Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:18 pm

    Hey thanks for the response, good to know some of you are into lyrics. well I just play acoustic guitar and only wrote it on saturday so theres not really alot to it as you say its a very basic song happy I like to start off slow and gradually build into it with some heavy strumming. At the moment the chords are just EM,G,D,EM with a slight variation to the chorus .I can add the chords to the lyrics if u like but as I said its very new and wrote it in about 10 mins when I was in work.I love the game as it was the inspiration just thought I would share it with u guys being as u r also into Dark souls (obviously).

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