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    My first dark souls commentary

    Post by Wade_Wilson on Tue Mar 27, 2012 5:18 pm

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    Re: My first dark souls commentary

    Post by Wade_Wilson on Tue Mar 27, 2012 5:34 pm

    No-one interested? ;(


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    Re: My first dark souls commentary

    Post by Dj-B-Man-Jr on Tue Mar 27, 2012 5:43 pm

    Not bad at all, keep it up "you cheating scumbag" lol!
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    Re: My first dark souls commentary

    Post by Wade_Wilson on Tue Mar 27, 2012 5:44 pm

    Dj-B-Man-Jr wrote:Not bad at all, keep it up "you cheating scumbag" lol!

    Thanks man, glad you enjoyed it cheers
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    Re: My first dark souls commentary

    Post by Bawheidbob on Tue Mar 27, 2012 5:48 pm

    Sorry been watching Champions League - Have had a look now nice info and i will keep an eye out for more although admittedly i do try and stay away from gameplay vids of this game until i have completed it, which i imagine at my rate of progress should only take me about another three years happy

    All the same if you are running around ringing the first couple of bells i am safe to watch up to there i think happy

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    Re: My first dark souls commentary

    Post by callipygias on Tue Mar 27, 2012 5:52 pm

    Very much looking forward to watching when I get home.
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    Re: My first dark souls commentary

    Post by Tolvo on Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:21 pm

    Very nice video Wade, however I will say there are two noticable things you need to work on. Your accent is fine, I mean sure if you want to get into it some Americans might have problems with it but the real issue is it sounds like you are a bit nervous when speaking. Which, yeah it's understandable. I remember my first time acting and still sometimes when I meet new casting directors I'm a bit wavering in my voice but it will just take some practice to get around that. Making sure to read a script out loud possibly to a friend can help though it might feel a bit odd asking a friend to listen to you prepare for a youtube video.

    I noticed something going on with the sound, you may have been moving away from the mic or doing something with your settings or on your computer to cause a fade. There are points where your voice while it sounds like it should be loud gets quiet and fades a bit then resurfaces. If you know the cause you should try and fix that because it does happen fairly often.

    All in all though it was a good video, though probably you should put up some more interesting footage in the background for future videos as you speak over it. Possibly things relating to the talk or PvP in the background will always keep people watching.

    Good luck man, and keep up the work.
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    Re: My first dark souls commentary

    Post by Robotech on Tue Mar 27, 2012 8:50 pm

    i enjoyed the video... keep it up, and lets see some more please!
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    Re: My first dark souls commentary

    Post by Serious_Much on Tue Mar 27, 2012 10:44 pm

    FINALLY

    Also, nice bit of Irish accent ya got there laddie. It's so faint I can't tell which it is :|

    Judging by the "wee" you slap in there you could be scottish though silly

    Your best line by far "Should take you all of 10 seconds to find it you cheating scumbag" lol! that's actually brilliant.

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    Re: My first dark souls commentary

    Post by Wade_Wilson on Wed Mar 28, 2012 4:10 am

    Tolvo wrote:Very nice video Wade, however I will say there are two noticable things you need to work on. Your accent is fine, I mean sure if you want to get into it some Americans might have problems with it but the real issue is it sounds like you are a bit nervous when speaking. Which, yeah it's understandable. I remember my first time acting and still sometimes when I meet new casting directors I'm a bit wavering in my voice but it will just take some practice to get around that. Making sure to read a script out loud possibly to a friend can help though it might feel a bit odd asking a friend to listen to you prepare for a youtube video.

    I noticed something going on with the sound, you may have been moving away from the mic or doing something with your settings or on your computer to cause a fade. There are points where your voice while it sounds like it should be loud gets quiet and fades a bit then resurfaces. If you know the cause you should try and fix that because it does happen fairly often.

    All in all though it was a good video, though probably you should put up some more interesting footage in the background for future videos as you speak over it. Possibly things relating to the talk or PvP in the background will always keep people watching.

    Good luck man, and keep up the work.

    Yeah I kept moving my mouth away from the mic since I kept feeling the need to cough. Thats for the feedback, I didnt have any other footage to put in but I'll be sure to have more interesting footage next time.
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    Re: My first dark souls commentary

    Post by Wade_Wilson on Wed Mar 28, 2012 4:12 am

    Serious_Much wrote:FINALLY

    Also, nice bit of Irish accent ya got there laddie. It's so faint I can't tell which it is :|

    Judging by the "wee" you slap in there you could be scottish though silly

    Your best line by far "Should take you all of 10 seconds to find it you cheating scumbag" lol! that's actually brilliant.

    +1

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    Re: My first dark souls commentary

    Post by Tolvo on Wed Mar 28, 2012 4:29 am

    Make sure before recording next time that you clear your throat and drink some water, and have some water on hand. As well with the practicing of the script, practice saying syllables and any letters that you may find difficult. Just a bit of an exercise to get the mind in the right place as well as making sure your mouth is doing what you want it to. I remember my first time having to talk in front of people, and it does take some getting used to. I know its no different for commentaries.
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    Re: My first dark souls commentary

    Post by Wade_Wilson on Wed Mar 28, 2012 12:15 pm

    Tolvo wrote:Make sure before recording next time that you clear your throat and drink some water, and have some water on hand. As well with the practicing of the script, practice saying syllables and any letters that you may find difficult. Just a bit of an exercise to get the mind in the right place as well as making sure your mouth is doing what you want it to. I remember my first time having to talk in front of people, and it does take some getting used to. I know its no different for commentaries.

    I think I take a drink of water about halfway through the video, but I'll definately try practice my syllables and prepare a rudementary script.

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    Re: My first dark souls commentary

    Post by Johannsny on Wed Mar 28, 2012 12:33 pm

    Nice, I enjoyed it.

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    Re: My first dark souls commentary

    Post by callipygias on Wed Mar 28, 2012 12:56 pm

    Me too. Looking forward to more. From your voice I would've guessed you were at least in your late 20s, btw!
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    Re: My first dark souls commentary

    Post by Wade_Wilson on Wed Mar 28, 2012 1:43 pm

    callipygias wrote:Me too. Looking forward to more. From your voice I would've guessed you were at least in your late 20s, btw!

    Thanks for the... compliment? lol!

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