My last build

I have reached a point in my life where I am too busy to play Dark Souls. I am trying to finish some other games right now because pretty soon, I wont have time to play games at all. For my last build I decided to go with a weapon I never used, the Lifehunt Scythe. I wanted to do a Priscilla cosplay after watching Mayhem's videos. 
If you people could give me some advice on what will probably be my last build until Dark Souls 2 comes out, I would appreciate it.

https://mugenmonkey.com/darksouls/?c=208839691790366631

I can't tell you how many times I've said that this or that will be my "last build" .

[url=idea 1]idea 1[/url]

I made some changes that might help out.  First of all, I removed one slot of attunement and changed the starting class to warrior.  If you need the two attunemnt slots, I understand, but this allows you to add another point to endurance so you can wield both the Uchi and the Blood Shield.  Blood Shield will boost your bleed resistance even more.  By using it you could also maybe swap the bloodbite ring out for something else.  Having another weapon that causes bleed buildup is how I've found the most success with the Lifehunt Scythe in the past.  You could go with your original setup and try something lighter than the Uchi, like the barbed straight sword, or even the gold tracer.  If you do end up using a lighter sidearm in combination with the bloodshield and the other equipment you already had, you might want to take some points away from endurance and do something like this:  idea 2.  You won't miss the endurance if you grass, and having a bit more HP might be nice.

Concerns:  You're a little light on HP and you're wearing fairly flimsy armor.

Hope this was helpful.  Good luck.

0 poise and low defense? If uou whiff with the scythe you'll be in trouble!