WARNING : Long Read!
I have came to off-topic for the past week wanting to post this only to get distracted. Wait, no this isn't on topic.
Okay, one of the things I like to do a lot of in my spare time is write and to cut to the chase I developed the idea of a story.
Here is a bit of background:
Set in the near future of the Universe a large organized set of alliances have developed called "Sanos".
Essentially this group is made up of both mythical creatures such as elves, Large Sentient Boars, supercomputers have developed personalities etc.
However, there is a small problem with the Elves of the alliance. Their brains have developed differently unlike many other creatures within the alliance and they have developed the ability to materialize items. This becomes a problem because they start to unintentionally cause a new type of creature through this power though called, "Conceptual Creatures".
These creatures, unlike most, do not have a physical body and in some cases are near impossible to kill. How these creatures are formed are through the emotional outbursts and breakdowns. Thus they can be formed from either an outburst of joy from a couple being married or the mental destruction of one of these Elves. With one of the largest issues being the conceptual creatures ability to change the way non-sentient creatures think. Such as if a creature formed from a mental break down they would be able to change the mindset of a large passive creature to a violent mindset instead.
The only way Sanos was able to figure this out was by capturing creatures that have been affected by the conceptual creatures and analyzing the brain to figure out that their brain has been tampered with. (I'm still working on putting everything together with this)
It is also because of the conceptual creatures that the Elves are eventually individually treated for every mental illness known, in order to prevent the creation of Conceptual Creatures. However this does not work as well as planned as the Elves start revolting, creating more violence on a Universal scale.
Enter another race that are basically the clean-up crew for everything, the Obsolis.
The Obsolis are basically creatures that have gained the closest thing to Immortality available. The reason for this being that they are not born completely intact. They are instead born with only a physical body with their conscious, semi-conscious, and emotions stored within physical discs that form within space. It's because of this that the Obsolis are normally demonized as "Abominations" for their ability to live forever unlike the other races.
It's because of this that an Obsolis by the name of Trua is forced into fixing the situation and must also stop a conceptual creature that has grown considerably in power called the Wuar that is now not only effecting non-sentient life but is also in the process of developing a violent celestial being that could destroy planets.
I might as well explain what a celestial being is too. Celestial beings are essentially planetary sized creatures. So far there have only been tales about these creatures existing but in reality they have never existed.
However, while interacting with both parties Trua starts to question their mission to save both sides because of how flawed and violent both sides really are. Eventually coming to the conclusion on whether both parties should live or die by the coming apocalypse that the celestial being may bring.
So what do you think? Is this a good concept for a book?
I'm starting to write the outline for it write now but I would like some criticism.
I have came to off-topic for the past week wanting to post this only to get distracted. Wait, no this isn't on topic.
Okay, one of the things I like to do a lot of in my spare time is write and to cut to the chase I developed the idea of a story.
Here is a bit of background:
Set in the near future of the Universe a large organized set of alliances have developed called "Sanos".
Essentially this group is made up of both mythical creatures such as elves, Large Sentient Boars, supercomputers have developed personalities etc.
However, there is a small problem with the Elves of the alliance. Their brains have developed differently unlike many other creatures within the alliance and they have developed the ability to materialize items. This becomes a problem because they start to unintentionally cause a new type of creature through this power though called, "Conceptual Creatures".
These creatures, unlike most, do not have a physical body and in some cases are near impossible to kill. How these creatures are formed are through the emotional outbursts and breakdowns. Thus they can be formed from either an outburst of joy from a couple being married or the mental destruction of one of these Elves. With one of the largest issues being the conceptual creatures ability to change the way non-sentient creatures think. Such as if a creature formed from a mental break down they would be able to change the mindset of a large passive creature to a violent mindset instead.
The only way Sanos was able to figure this out was by capturing creatures that have been affected by the conceptual creatures and analyzing the brain to figure out that their brain has been tampered with. (I'm still working on putting everything together with this)
It is also because of the conceptual creatures that the Elves are eventually individually treated for every mental illness known, in order to prevent the creation of Conceptual Creatures. However this does not work as well as planned as the Elves start revolting, creating more violence on a Universal scale.
Enter another race that are basically the clean-up crew for everything, the Obsolis.
The Obsolis are basically creatures that have gained the closest thing to Immortality available. The reason for this being that they are not born completely intact. They are instead born with only a physical body with their conscious, semi-conscious, and emotions stored within physical discs that form within space. It's because of this that the Obsolis are normally demonized as "Abominations" for their ability to live forever unlike the other races.
It's because of this that an Obsolis by the name of Trua is forced into fixing the situation and must also stop a conceptual creature that has grown considerably in power called the Wuar that is now not only effecting non-sentient life but is also in the process of developing a violent celestial being that could destroy planets.
I might as well explain what a celestial being is too. Celestial beings are essentially planetary sized creatures. So far there have only been tales about these creatures existing but in reality they have never existed.
However, while interacting with both parties Trua starts to question their mission to save both sides because of how flawed and violent both sides really are. Eventually coming to the conclusion on whether both parties should live or die by the coming apocalypse that the celestial being may bring.
So what do you think? Is this a good concept for a book?
I'm starting to write the outline for it write now but I would like some criticism.