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    Just a thought.

    Post by Rynn on Tue May 07, 2013 4:48 pm

    This pencil represents death.
    I quite like drawing.
    Some drawings are quite easy to finish...
    Some drawings, though, take careful planning to do right.
    When one finishes a drawing, they feel satisfaction.
    Some people never draw again, but some, like me, feel inclined to draw even more.
    Occasionally, I consider drawing a picture of you, but i never do.
    When i picture it in my head, you always wind up with the head of a lamb.
    i know i'd never feel satisfied with the drawing.
    so i never even start a sketch.
    Occasionally, I consider drawing a picture of you, but i never do.
    When i picture it in my head, you always wind up with the head of a lamb.
    i know i'd never feel satisfied with that drawing.
    it's because of this that i never even start a sketch.

    Occasionally, i find it hard to breathe, like now. at times like these, i consider drawing a portrait of myself.
    It would be my last portrait, and so the pencil never glides across parchment.
    I ask myself if I'd like to draw, but nothing comes to mind.
    That thought, it drifts back.
    I quite like drawing, but i simply have nothing left to draw...
    My visage remains unsketched, and the pencil remains but in my hand.

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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by User1 on Tue May 07, 2013 5:45 pm

    This could serve as a direct "fudge you" for my complete lack of understanding of any part of it. It just seems impossible to make a meaning out of it.
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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? on Tue May 07, 2013 6:04 pm

    I get it. I thought it was nice, not sure if she's serious about what she wrote or if she's just being poetic for the sake of being poetic and wanted a canvas.


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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by User1 on Tue May 07, 2013 6:06 pm

    I doubt it.
    I think part of it serves as a metaphor, but no one told me that. tongue
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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by AnCapaillMor on Tue May 07, 2013 6:09 pm

    2 ways of interpreting the first stanza, it seems personal so i won't get into it but You'll never know unless you try, you don't want to be in the future looking at the what if's, they can tear you up. Take a chance, hindsight is a terrible thing.


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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by Rynn on Tue May 07, 2013 6:10 pm

    pray tell pendant, what do i mean?
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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? on Tue May 07, 2013 6:14 pm

    I Skyped you my interpretation.

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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by Hue on Tue May 07, 2013 6:19 pm

    That's a really big "thought" you have there


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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by GrinTwist on Tue May 07, 2013 6:23 pm

    Ok because my mind is out of energy at the moment I was able to interpret this:

    Rynn is a murderer, unlike some others she has a hobby of murdering many people, and she wants to murder me.


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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by Rynn on Tue May 07, 2013 6:37 pm

    that's a bit... off, Grin.
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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by GrinTwist on Tue May 07, 2013 6:39 pm

    Oh, I'm sorry Rynn.

    Please don't kill me.


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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by Latitoast on Tue May 07, 2013 6:39 pm

    You're a mass murderer, sometimes you plan on killing me, but you don't know how to do it exactly, so you never try, sometimes you get sick of your inability to slay me, so you consider suicide since I am the one target who shall never meet his end at the hands of your pencil if death and destruction.


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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by User1 on Tue May 07, 2013 6:41 pm

    BAM!
    The thread blew up!
    And the signature jokes to go with it!
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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by nsane32 on Tue May 07, 2013 7:46 pm

    GrinTwist wrote:Ok because my mind is out of energy at the moment I was able to interpret this:

    Rynn is a murderer, unlike some others she has a hobby of murdering many people, and she wants to murder me.

    No thats me


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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by Carphil on Tue May 07, 2013 9:30 pm

    ohh I'm either too tired or too stupid to understand this but..

    Using this guy > AnCapaillMor < interpretation I can say that this "moral" or something has some impact in my life right now, if only I had some danm oportunity!


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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by Rynn on Wed May 08, 2013 8:35 am

    The pencil represents death.
    I'm quite fond of drawing... which is done with a pencil: death.
    Some drawings... they are easy to finish...
    While other drawings... they take much planning...
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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by AnCapaillMor on Wed May 08, 2013 8:54 am

    But what is death, is it the end of dreams? of hope? asperations? as you transition from thoughts to paper\canvas hoping that you'll perfectly capture that thought that dream. what is paper\canvas.

    Was the poem to reveal something about the author or the poem to reveal something to the reader with their intterpretation.


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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by Rynn on Wed May 08, 2013 9:07 am

    The great thing about art is it is in the eye of the beholder. to me, it was to reveal something about myself. To you, perhaps it's for the reader.
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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by AnCapaillMor on Wed May 08, 2013 9:54 am

    Touche reminds me of Snooty Mcbogerballs, great southpark episode. Not that i'm saying the poem was anything like butters book, very impressive actually.
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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by Rynn on Wed May 08, 2013 1:46 pm

    Life ends with death. When one finishes a drawing, they might feel satisfation, even if they don't, others appreciate the piece of art.
    When faced with death, some never draw again, others are drawn to it, like a moth flittering toward a flame.

    Occasionally, I picture 'drawing' you. Bringing life to an end. When I do, i always wind up drawing you with the head of a lamb... symbolizing how easily i could snuff out your light, if i deemed it necessary...

    But I know, I'd never feel satisfied with such a 'drawing' The consequences far outweigh the benefits: nearly none.

    Usually... usually i don't even draw a sketch, or really start considering how i'd go about some such act. These were special circumstances, though... something i won't further discuss.

    Occasionally, i find it hard to breathe, like now.
    at times like these, i consider drawing a portrait of myself.
    It would be my last portrait, and so the pencil never glides across parchment.
    I ask myself if I'd like to draw, but nothing comes to mind.
    That thought, it drifts back.
    I quite like drawing, but i simply have nothing left to draw...
    My visage remains unsketched, and the pencil remains but in my hand.
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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by AnCapaillMor on Wed May 08, 2013 1:59 pm

    OK I got the lamb thing totally wrong.


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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by nsane32 on Wed May 08, 2013 2:02 pm

    I get it


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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by SirArchmage on Wed May 08, 2013 5:49 pm

    Wow. Just. Wow. That is great. Also, it is one of those poems(Or at least something in the format of a poem) that is creepily....relatable to me. Not with artwork, but something else.


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    Re: Just a thought.

    Post by Hue on Wed May 08, 2013 7:37 pm

    I still don"t get it
    I feel...inferior


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