Tolvo wrote:Death begins with a journey
The willful persevere
Life brings friends and foes
An end starts the adventure all over again
Choices are simply an illusion.
Now get on topic and write some Junior High Grade Poetry people!
Rap is better
just kidding poetry is awesome.
Anyways I will now try to review your poem.
The willful persevere references the fact that Dark Souls can only be completed by those who are patient.
Life brings friends and foes references the fact that in Dark Souls during your "life" (playthrough) You gain many allies and enemies, but your allies soon become enemies too (they hollow)
An end starts the adventure all over again represents the never ending cycle of Fire and Dark, it also represents NG+
Choices are simply an illusion says with hard truth that in Dark Souls both endings are equally bad, you kindle the flame, you just repeat the same course again and again, you become the Dark Lord, you unleash the Abyss on the world just like in Oolacile.
Beautiful poem by the way