Some new builds. Thought I'd share them

I know I love seeing well made, interesting characters so I thought I would show you a few of mine. Go ahead and copy them, I've had good luck with most.

Aqua Sl 120 (Inspired by SansvieDotCom) : http://mmdks.com/umj

Black Flame Master Sl 100 (Also inspired by Sans) : http://mmdks.com/umo

Obsidian Greatsword vitality build Sl 100 (Take 20 from vit and put it into faith for a buff, wicked effective) : http://mmdks.com/umv
Effective Grant Build Sl 120 (Finally made a build that can use the grant well, shame I can't get more poise. It also uses this unfortunately ) : http://mmdks.com/umy

Would love to see if anyone could improve on these builds.

This is how I would make the Grant build:

http://m.mugenmonkey.com/?c=422859289348585759

The low AR isn't worth the 50 Str. The roll 1HR1 360 is cool, but it's not so different from the 2H ground smash. + 2H for the WoG explosion. Crossbow to lure them into bs and can use elemental Pike if your enemy feels dodgy. No mask needed, can use mom for more HP, shouldn't look so bad with the robe. Poise isn't needed for the ground smash.

I've played with many hybrids and finally I learned that mixing lots of magic with melee heavy weapons is just a waste of time, can even get you killed. Now I just try to focus on either magic or melee and use the former as backup of the latter or vice versa. For example your black flame master seems to be melee based since you got a Flamberge, yet it has high Att and the crown. There's no reason to not use the Flamberge in exchange for spell casting, other than for fun. I just tweaked that one into a pyro caster, using the rapier and the dagger for turtling/backup pokes and backstab, respectively. I would use a bow as backup on this one since pyros are close range.

http://mugenmonkey.com/darksouls/?c=439489867748689166