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    VaDoom
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by VaDoom on Fri Apr 19, 2013 11:03 am

    I started it as a poem, then used it (with some adaptations) for a song with my former band.

    My consciousness is at the top
    The ultimate tool is my hand
    But as i walk through the hall
    The door is closed in my head

    My muscles have no meaning
    Omnipresence is in sight
    As I'm leaving my body
    My skin holds me inside

    I'm strong as a titan
    But you handle me as a doll
    And conviced me I'm no one
    When you trapped me in a hole

    My clock has no needle
    Space and time are illusions
    But behind the panel
    All controls are frozen

    I'm strong as a titan
    But you handle me as a doll
    And conviced me I'm no one
    When you tricked me in your love

    I could have been immortal
    But I met you on my way
    As I go back to earth
    I become aware...
    I'm dying....
    I'm happy and dying


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by User1 on Fri Apr 19, 2013 12:40 pm

    @Tart, that poem was so touching, I was on the brink of crying.
    @VaDoom, that is a very imaginative poem. I like the rhyming, congrats to both of you!

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