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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by SlakeMoth on Sat Nov 03, 2012 7:26 pm

    WhatDoesThePendantDo? wrote:Of course, we still have the Museum of Souls, which does, in many ways, perform a function parallel to this thread.

    I have a bunch of poems on the Museum of Souls thread.
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by SlakeMoth on Sat Nov 03, 2012 7:48 pm

    I don't write poetry, just silly verse which isn't remotely deep. I just made this one up:

    On first meeting Artorias:

    So here I stand with sword in hand,

    The fog door in my sights,

    I step on through

    Say how d'you do,

    Then out go all the lights!
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by skarekrow13 on Sat Nov 03, 2012 7:55 pm

    Slake I love your verse

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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by SlakeMoth on Sun Nov 04, 2012 5:59 am

    Thank you Skare. I'm glad someone does.
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by ChizFreak on Sun Nov 04, 2012 8:10 am

    Mr. Tart wrote:
    ViralEnsign_ wrote:which i think all of my poems are....

    Well, that's just silly. Your poems weren't silly though, so no worries about it.

    Hey Tart, I updated my poem, and renamed my thread too, so, if you could please update the poem and update the link to my thread, I would be very grateful happy

    The new link is: http://soulswiki.forumsrpg.com/t13889-fog-dreamer-kind-of-poem-by-me

    PS: Read it again, and tell me want you think, if you want to winking


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Mr. Tart on Sun Nov 04, 2012 1:01 pm

    Done. Will read it later, but right now my brain is like a f*cking pancake. Sleep


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by ChizFreak on Sun Nov 04, 2012 7:27 pm

    Mr. Tart wrote:Done. Will read it later, but right now my brain is like a f*cking pancake. Sleep

    Haha, it's okay, get some rest! Oh, and please delete the old version, I prefer the new version silly, that's the final haha.


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Rudmed on Sun Nov 04, 2012 11:11 pm


    The Sniper
    High on the mountaintop
    I wait patiently
    I stare through the eagle's eye
    More precise than I
    I find my prey
    As I do every day.
    I set my sights
    And pray with all my might.
    For god to forgive me
    And to bless his family.
    The bullet flies through the sky
    As I stare through the eagle eye.
    The corpse falls.
    Its God calls.
    I return to base.
    To be haunted by the face.


    The Medic
    Stop the bleeding
    That's what they said.
    If only it was that easy.
    The shrapnel through the heart.
    The screams of flying shells
    Mixes with the screams of hell.
    The missing limbs.
    The final hymns.
    Pray to God as they scream in pain.
    Pray to God as they scream your name.


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Mr. Tart on Mon Nov 05, 2012 5:38 am

    This is what goes through my mind when i look in the mirror in the morning:
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    The Man In The Mirror
    I’m sick of you,
    You f*cking liar,
    You f*cking cheat,
    I’m sick of you,
    You f*cking coward,
    You f*cking deadbeat,
    I’m sick of you,
    You f*cking fool,
    You f*cking tool,
    I’m sick of all the lies,
    And all the tries,
    I’m sick of your face,
    It’s out of place.


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Tolvo on Mon Nov 05, 2012 5:42 am

    I need to remember in the morning to read these, I keep forgetting.
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Mr. Tart on Mon Nov 05, 2012 6:05 am

    The metaphor
    The grey floor,
    The colorful walls,
    Do they represent us?
    Am I the floor? The grey floor that collects the dirt from each boot,
    The floor that gets walked on,
    Is that me?
    Are the colorful walls them? The ones that shine like a rainbow,
    The walls that smile at you,
    Is that them?

    Is it all just a metaphor for who I am?
    Or is my mind just playing tricks on me?

    The white sheep,
    The black sheep,
    Do they represent us?
    Am I the black sheep? The black sheep that stands out,
    Yet that no one pays attention to,
    Is that me?
    Are the white sheep them? The ones that everyone sees,
    The ones who are normal,
    Is that them?

    Is it all just a metaphor for who I am?
    Or is my mind just playing tricks on me?


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Rudmed on Mon Nov 05, 2012 11:48 am

    Okay...we need to have a less depressing poetry morning. I understand they're good and all, but...lets not kill the joy.


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by skarekrow13 on Mon Nov 05, 2012 12:36 pm

    Less depressing eh?

    Hmmmm.......

    Nope. Got nothing.
    Not a something.

    Pondering at work,
    rhymes that won't make me a jerk.
    To help make a happy morning,
    or raise flags like a warning.

    Haven't got a clue,
    on a poem that for you,
    would seem like silly verse.
    Maybe Seuss-like, maybe worse.

    I simply can't imagine cadence,
    even on the fringe just like a valence,
    electron charged up minus.
    Rather grab my blanket, a la Linus.

    That will keep me warm and safe,
    until with clever words I strafe.
    Impact your eyes and brain with wit,
    until your belly sides do split.

    Until that day arrives,
    when poetry I can make,
    I will yearn and strive.
    Right now I'm a fake.

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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Tolvo on Mon Nov 05, 2012 2:33 pm

    Not depressing? Uh...I'll see if I have any.
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by SlakeMoth on Mon Nov 05, 2012 7:46 pm

    'If I could beat Artorias

    My joy would be uproarious,

    But since he likes to flatten me

    And really make me mad,

    My happiness is limited

    Until I beat the cad.'
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by ViralEnsign_ on Mon Nov 05, 2012 9:05 pm

    Ahahah love that one Slake


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by SlakeMoth on Tue Nov 06, 2012 1:50 pm

    'I wish I liked to read blank verse

    I've really, really tried

    But I find verse that doesn't rhyme

    Leaves me unsatisfied.

    Verse isn't verse if it don't rhyme

    And so I cannot thank

    Indulgent souls who pen the stuff,

    To me blank verse is...........blank.
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by skarekrow13 on Tue Nov 06, 2012 1:56 pm

    big grin

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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by SlakeMoth on Tue Nov 06, 2012 4:06 pm

    skarekrow13 wrote: big grin

    lol!
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Overtly_Sadistic on Wed Nov 07, 2012 2:47 am

    Look through her eyes far past her disguise to where the serpent lies and waits.
    Beware, steel your heart and shield your soul,
    she'll come around and devour you whole!

    Surrounded by mirrors she perfects her disguise,
    painting a new face to keep up with her lies.

    The blood of her victims she uses as glue,
    to hold strong the pieces of those she once knew.

    The memoirs of times so long ago shared,
    no longer feel the kiss of soft morning air.

    Look through her heyes far past her disguise,
    to where the serpent lies and glares.

    She wears a scarlet leter on the scars of her wrists,
    if his smiles don't phase her their love won't exist.

    All call him a fool, a faker and cheat,
    for falling in love with someone so weak.

    He'll never back down,
    he'll stand on his feet.
    The world will curse him,
    and await his defeat.

    (Sorry if it's not very 'prose', truth be told it's closer to simple lyrics, didn't see another thread where it would make more sense to place it though.)

    Cheers.


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by skarekrow13 on Wed Nov 07, 2012 11:46 am

    I think it fits here. Good work too by the way and welcome to the forums.

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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by SlakeMoth on Wed Nov 07, 2012 1:47 pm

    Yep, I agree with Skare.
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Mr. Tart on Mon Nov 26, 2012 9:07 am

    Spoiler:
    My Fears
    I fear the deep of water.
    Not being able to reach the bottom with my feet. Not being able to feel the safety of land.
    I fear loneliness.
    Not having someone by my side. Not having someone to care for me.
    I fear life.
    Not being able to trust someone. Not being able to love someone.
    I fear death.
    Not being able to die. Not being able to end it all.
    Not knowing what I’m getting myself into.
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    I Feel
    I’m still young, yet I feel old.
    I can see, yet I feel blind.
    I’m happy, yet I feel sad.
    I’m alive, yet I feel dead.
    I’m loved, yet I feel hated.
    I want to live, yet I want to die.


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Animaaal on Sat Mar 16, 2013 12:53 pm

    Necroable?

    How to Impress a Woman


    It seems so simple
    or so at first,
    but women want not
    nor attract to thirst.

    Mens minds wander aimless
    searching for answers,
    but being uncertain
    is what is the cancer.

    Why would she want me
    is what men wonder,
    the doubt itself
    is what is the blunder.

    Men always thought
    why did he get her,
    why did I get nothing
    for being unsure?

    It seems that confidence
    will conquer all,
    but what about men
    that wouldn't let you fall?

    So he likes himself
    good for him,
    he likes everyone
    does that not seem grim?

    So a fake sense of assure
    is that how it is,
    that's what they want
    only a sense of a bliss.

    They don't want to hear
    hi, nice to meet ya,
    they do want to hear
    they're your biggest feature.

    To impress a lady
    you must live with the lie,
    that you are rock solid
    and don't know how to cry.

    If he appears not strong
    and short on emotion,
    his image will fade
    and she'll waiver devotion.

    The clear answer lies
    in not believing,
    that a man can be honest
    and not at all deceiving.

    If that man cannot
    put himself above you,
    is it not the woman
    who is lacking the clue?

    Unsure humble men
    almost never succeed,
    women want illusions
    man's timidness impedes.

    How to impress a woman
    always seems to ellude,
    a man lacking sureness
    his courting concludes.

    However there seems
    one exception this this,
    a man can get lucky
    and find an angel amidst.
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Mr. Tart on Fri Apr 19, 2013 8:07 am

    This poem isn't mine. My mother wrote it for our family friend Richard.

    "To my Dear friend Richard

    The child in you

    When I looked into your eyes,
    those beautiful, heavenly blue
    What would they reflect?
    What would shine through?

    What deep and pure feelings
    would they bring to me?
    In the deepest of your soul,
    what would I see?

    I saw a sincere spirit,
    the beauty of whom you are
    A traveller on the path of life
    and you have travelled very far

    A warm and loving person
    with so many emotions to share
    An honest and trustworthy Friend
    who is always there

    But there is something I value even more
    Something so very unique and true
    You shared with me a treasure
    You showed me the child in you."


    This poem was written years ago when i was still a kid. I would like to dedicate it to Richard, a dear friend of our family who died last night. Rest in peace, Richard.


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