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    Post by Mr. Tart on Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:39 pm

    This here topic was an idea i came up with while reading ChizFreaks poem(kind of), which you should by the way check out below:

    http://soulswiki.forumsrpg.com/t13889-fog-dreamer-kind-of-poem-by-me

    If you're too lazy it's quoted below as well:

    REFRESHED POEM BY ChizFreak
    Spoiler:
    ChizFreak wrote:Fog (Dreamer):

    "As I saw her passing by,
    repressed feelings and memories returned
    Memories of things that never occurred
    And probably never will;
    I forget about the world
    And meditate about things to come
    Or not"

    "I look around me
    I analyze all my moves
    Past and future
    What should I do?”

    “I make assumptions
    Of everything that could occur
    I create illusions
    of alternative worlds"

    "Where things exist
    above the clouds
    of the green sky
    I tell them to not cry
    over things that will never pass"

    "I tell myself,
    between projects and plans
    of future, above all;
    I must"

    "Realize how things are;
    I must
    cross the fog,
    and arrive
    somewhere at last"

    "Maybe one day we’ll find out,
    even so, a dreamer I am”

    “I wake up
    as she walks away;
    Back to reality I guess..."

    Keep in mind that one is not mine, but ChizFreaks!

    Anyhow, lets just get to the point, which is simple. Post and share your poems. It's all in good fun. Got something dramatic? Cool. Something funny? Cool. Something that's not a poem? GTFO!

    Hope there's people interested in poems. tongue


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by ChizFreak on Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:42 pm

    Mr. Tart wrote:

    Hope there's people interested in poems. tongue

    We will find out soon enough I guess.


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? on Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:44 pm

    I have great interest in poems. Sadly, poems don't seem to have great interest in me. silly

    Seriously, though, I cannot write poetry to save my life, reading a nice poem, however, is always enjoyable. happy

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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Mr. Tart on Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:48 pm

    WhatDoesThePendantDo? wrote:I have great interest in poems. Sadly, poems don't seem to have great interest in me. silly

    Seriously, though, I cannot write poetry to save my life, reading a nice poem, however, is always enjoyable. happy

    How about if i post one of my own, you will give it a try? happy

    If you're having a hard time, just spend some time to think about what you like/hate. Something that gets the blood flowing, and just let the words shout! Give out a roar! SCREAM! SCREEAM! Sorry, kinda lost it. Shrug

    Point is, of course, writing a poem is not hard, but you need the inspiration obviously. It's always easier to write one when aim at one certain thing only. For example, bullying maybe? If you were bullied as a kid, or possibly even now, all you could do is describe your experience in a well versed text. tongue


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Tolvo on Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:49 pm

    I wonder if poetic prose counts.
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Mr. Tart on Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:52 pm

    Oh, of course. Post whatever you like as long as it is somewhat similar to poems at the very least. Being poetic is of course enough. Joy


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? on Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:53 pm

    Of course, we still have the Museum of Souls, which does, in many ways, perform a function parallel to this thread.

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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by ChizFreak on Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:53 pm

    WhatDoesThePendantDo? wrote:I have great interest in poems. Sadly, poems don't seem to have great interest in me. silly

    Seriously, though, I cannot write poetry to save my life, reading a nice poem, however, is always enjoyable. happy

    Nice to see some interest, just to let you and everyone else know, if you have any feedback about my kind-of poem, PM it to me, or post it in my thread. I would like to write more, and it would be nice to know what people think about them.

    @Tolvo, I have no idea what "prose" means (and Google is not helping), but if it's poetic it doesn't matter the format.

    PS: Where's your Avatar from? It reminds me of Magic: The Gathering for some reason.


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Tolvo on Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:57 pm

    It's an alien from Star Wars, Nom Anor. Master of propaganda.

    The simplest way to put it, Prose is poetry without Rhythm. Or it could be considered nontraditional poetry.
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? on Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:58 pm

    Prose is just standard writing. No scheme, no rhyme - just words.

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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by GrinTwist on Thu Nov 01, 2012 10:58 pm

    I actually do have a bit of an interest in poems.

    I might come back tomorrow and post one but as of now I have a sandwich reserved for me in the Off-topic section.


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by JohnnyHarpoon on Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:04 pm

    I didn't write this, but a friend of mine did and it always really impressed me, especially as I never suspected him the deep thinker. It is actually a haiku:

    It's the best of times
    A highly mechanized world
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Tolvo on Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:07 pm

    This is one of my few works that can be posted on this site.

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    A Trip Across The River

    "Finally I have arrived,
    The battle was fiercely fought.
    Long had I traveled,
    To fight for my gods.
    Though my vision had faded,
    My sight was now set.
    The horizon was before me,
    A river blocked my path.
    The other side veiled in fog
    A single boat at the near bank.
    The grey eyed man waited,
    Oar in hand.
    His hand outstretched,
    A coin in mine."

    "My tribute was enough,
    We pushed off towards my destination.
    My fathers would be there,
    Where their lost son would be found.
    One day my son shall make my trip,
    Where some day my sons will find themselves,
    And I shall welcome them in turn.
    An endless cycle,
    For our gods.
    An opportunity to prove our mortality,
    For those without it."

    "At last the land was visible,
    The black sand visible.
    The sounds of strife were at my back,
    While silence lain before me.
    The Herald stood stark,
    Unseen with a tender's presence.
    He welcomed me,
    His domain would be my home.
    This was the final sign,
    I had passed the end.
    A new existence was coming,
    Hopefully they would sing songs of my deeds.
    Though the world can be quite unfair,
    This was indeed the ultimate Balance."
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by skarekrow13 on Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:15 pm

    Excellent as always Tolvo

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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Tolvo on Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:21 pm

    Thank you, so far I like everything that has been posted in the thread.

    I wonder if I could perhaps post my more vulgar stories under an "Artistic" license.
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by skarekrow13 on Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:24 pm

    I'm fine with that big grin

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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Mr. Tart on Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:25 pm

    Well, as the OP i guess my thought is what counts the most? So, yes, unless it goes against the forums guidelines?

    I'd like to see anything though, whether vulgar or not.

    Perhaps a child advisor or something like that would be adviced just in case? Idk. Still. Anything posted, i look forward to. silly


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Tolvo on Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:27 pm

    Below, adult content. Also this is one work of mine I'm really regretful about. I feel the last two lines are terrible.

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    The Face Behind

    A young boy simply cannot sleep,
    The clawing is too great.
    So harsh and coarse an act.
    From the hall he believes it comes.
    Curiosity and pride forces him,
    His feet pattering from the bed.
    The moist drops just around the corner.
    A crimson leak soaks his toes.
    A simple drawer shakes his bones.
    It rattles and groans,
    His presence boding.
    A tiny hand pulls it a crack.
    The wood peels and scratches ears.
    Three little pink balls meet fearful eyes.
    They wobble as the portal opens more.
    He falls back as the stretched,
    Pulsing flesh reaching out.
    Blood pours from sores.
    Tiny limbs reach out.
    It coos and earnestly moves.
    A loud pop sounds as it wedges free,
    The long phallic body extending.
    He was no longer near,
    Lights left on in the hall.
    A door slams shut as sheets cover him.
    He shakes and cries before slumber.
    In his dreams a flat rashy face rests on his.
    His parents enraged question his action.
    They point to the hole and cuts in his door.
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Tolvo on Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:47 pm

    I take it a story about child **** doesn't sit well?
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    Post by Mr. Tart on Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:49 pm

    It's all in a poetical purpose, right? Shrug


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Tolvo on Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:52 pm

    Yes, it's actually based on a reoccurring nightmare from when I was a child.
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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Mr. Tart on Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:54 pm

    If that's the case i'd just say it's even better for this topic. My personal opinion on music, poems and pretty much any kind of art is that, whatever is personal is of more value. And i do not say this with an intent to offend anyone, but i can, myself, enjoy anything artistic all the more if it's personal.

    I myself wish to become a musician. Mainly a singer, and i value the text the most in music. Though i'm not trying to tell my life story here or anything. Just wanted to explain myself. Anyhow, that was a great poem as well!


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by ChizFreak on Thu Nov 01, 2012 11:59 pm

    Mr. Tart wrote:If that's the case i'd just say it's even better for this topic. My personal opinion on music, poems and pretty much any kind of art is that, whatever is personal is of more value. And i do not say this with an intent to offend anyone, but i can, myself, enjoy anything artistic all the more if it's personal.

    I myself wish to become a musician. Mainly a singer, and i value the text the most in music. Though i'm not trying to tell my life story here or anything. Just wanted to explain myself. Anyhow, that was a great poem as well!

    Maybe we can work together some time? I'm a musician, but my voice sucks. so maybe we can complement each other? We would have to talk about music influences and such. I have no problem though, I love talking about music. Also we both write, so, that's a plus big grin


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    Re: Post your poems

    Post by Mr. Tart on Fri Nov 02, 2012 12:00 am

    I'm afraid i would never dare do such thing. I'm shy. My curse. I honestly can hardly speak infront of my class, it's just way too hard. So i don't think that would occur anytime soon sadly, as much as i would like to do something like that.


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    Post by Hatsune Miku on Fri Nov 02, 2012 12:04 am

    I used to write poems when I was depressed, in this goth phase of my life. It was bloody horrible.

    Man, am I glad I got to feeling better about things and even myself.


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