Now, who's this Cheeselegs? :suspect:
EDIT: Oh, not the Changelings, right?
WhatDoesThePendantDo? wrote:Sorry boys, I was a little out of it earlier.
Now, who's this Cheeselegs? :suspect:
EDIT: Oh, not the Changelings, right?
Yarxov wrote:Reapers suggestions were good except for the "The demon from before" by saying "The Demon from before" changes the pace of the writing, the main issue is with the "before", a tone changer imo, maybe something in the context of "A shadow passes (Solaire) like a tainted thought from the bowels of hell, materializing in the decayed beast that caused his summoning" just my 2/100 (The last part can be changed and made fancier, I just didnt want to make it too different from the rest of the text, and the sentence should blend.)
dancash1808 wrote:Oh god... if he was drunk last night and he won half his fights with me 0.0
WhatDoesThePendantDo? wrote:As for story suggestions, I do have something I want to say with regards to the latest chapter, but I'll wait for Wade to update again so it's not as fresh as it is now.
WhatDoesThePendantDo? wrote:Wow! :affraid:
I just had a question regarding the General's name.
WhatDoesThePendantDo? wrote:Please do! Do you have the game or are you just playing your friend's copy a whole bunch?
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