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    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? Sun Sep 30, 2012 12:37 am

    Sorry boys, I was a little out of it earlier.

    Now, who's this Cheeselegs? :suspect:

    EDIT: Oh, not the Changelings, right?
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    Post by Reaperfan Sun Sep 30, 2012 1:15 am

    WhatDoesThePendantDo? wrote:Sorry boys, I was a little out of it earlier.

    Now, who's this Cheeselegs? :suspect:

    EDIT: Oh, not the Changelings, right?

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    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? Sun Sep 30, 2012 1:20 am

    Right, right. Swiss cheese legs! silly
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    Post by Yarxov Sun Sep 30, 2012 1:29 pm

    We're critiquing Wade now?
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    Post by Wade_Wilson Sun Sep 30, 2012 2:16 pm

    If you want to, every bit of feedback helps make me a better writer and my stories better.
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    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? Sun Sep 30, 2012 2:44 pm

    Damn, I'm embarrassed. :oops: I re-read some of my posts from last night and crikey what an idiot I was. Look Skyward
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    Post by Wade_Wilson Sun Sep 30, 2012 3:48 pm

    Were ya drunk?
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    Post by dancash1808 Sun Sep 30, 2012 4:07 pm

    Oh god... if he was drunk last night and he won half his fights with me 0.0
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    Post by Yarxov Sun Sep 30, 2012 4:26 pm

    Reapers suggestions were good except for the "The demon from before" by saying "The Demon from before" changes the pace of the writing, the main issue is with the "before", a tone changer imo, maybe something in the context of "A shadow passes (Solaire) like a tainted thought from the bowels of hell, materializing in the decayed beast that caused his summoning" just my 2/100 (The last part can be changed and made fancier, I just didnt want to make it too different from the rest of the text, and the sentence should blend.)
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    Post by Wade_Wilson Sun Sep 30, 2012 4:55 pm

    Yarxov wrote:Reapers suggestions were good except for the "The demon from before" by saying "The Demon from before" changes the pace of the writing, the main issue is with the "before", a tone changer imo, maybe something in the context of "A shadow passes (Solaire) like a tainted thought from the bowels of hell, materializing in the decayed beast that caused his summoning" just my 2/100 (The last part can be changed and made fancier, I just didnt want to make it too different from the rest of the text, and the sentence should blend.)

    Eh, what you suggested (IMO) is too different from the general style of the paragraph, but I'll think about it.
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    Post by Yarxov Sun Sep 30, 2012 4:58 pm

    I know, thats why it was only an example, and the sidenote at the end says that pretty much.
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    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? Sun Sep 30, 2012 5:23 pm

    dancash1808 wrote:Oh god... if he was drunk last night and he won half his fights with me 0.0

    Nah man, I was just high. Not as bad. :drunken:
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    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? Sun Sep 30, 2012 5:26 pm

    As for story suggestions, I do have something I want to say with regards to the latest chapter, but I'll wait for Wade to update again so it's not as fresh as it is now.

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    Post by Wade_Wilson Sun Sep 30, 2012 5:43 pm

    WhatDoesThePendantDo? wrote:As for story suggestions, I do have something I want to say with regards to the latest chapter, but I'll wait for Wade to update again so it's not as fresh as it is now.


    Might as well tell me now, I won't have another chapter done for 9/10 days.
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    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? Sun Sep 30, 2012 5:44 pm

    Wow! :affraid:

    I just had a question regarding the General's name.
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    Post by Wade_Wilson Sun Sep 30, 2012 5:46 pm

    WhatDoesThePendantDo? wrote:Wow! :affraid:

    I just had a question regarding the General's name.

    Sure, fire ahead.
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    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? Sun Sep 30, 2012 5:48 pm

    Was there a reason for him to actually be given that name or was he just named that to give Solaire an easy opportunity at a wise-crack in one of the exchanges there?

    Because that's kind of what it felt like.
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    Post by Wade_Wilson Sun Sep 30, 2012 5:54 pm

    I called him "Mimi Cry" to reference the mimic chests in Dark Souls, which are referred to as Mimicrys by the orange sign soapstone. I thought Mimicry would be fitting as both changelings and mimic chests can take on deceiving appearances.
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    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? Sun Sep 30, 2012 5:58 pm

    Wow, what a response - a stunning riposte! That put me in my place! "Beware of mimicry" indeed.

    It was kind of hard to get the reference though, maybe you could do something to not make it as, I don't know, obfuscatory.

    Maybe too it's just that I'm an idiot and blind and didn't see what was staring me right in the face. silly


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    Post by Wade_Wilson Sun Sep 30, 2012 6:00 pm

    But my dear Pendant, some references are best left subtle.
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    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? Sun Sep 30, 2012 6:01 pm

    Too bad rep doesn't count in off-topic, because by golly that post deserved it! silly
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    Post by Wade_Wilson Sun Sep 30, 2012 6:11 pm

    I really should start participating in the BL2 thread, hehe.
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    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? Sun Sep 30, 2012 6:13 pm

    Please do! Do you have the game or are you just playing your friend's copy a whole bunch?
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    Post by Wade_Wilson Sun Sep 30, 2012 6:14 pm

    WhatDoesThePendantDo? wrote:Please do! Do you have the game or are you just playing your friend's copy a whole bunch?

    Level 21 Axton, got my own copy.
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    Post by WhatDoesThePendantDo? Sun Sep 30, 2012 6:19 pm

    Damn console barrier. :x

    I really would like to play with you.

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